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Chapter 6 - The Return of the Keys

The third week of May arrived with unseasonable heat. The humidity rolled off the Cumberland River like wet steam, and the azaleas in my yard dropped their flowers, leaving behind dark green leaves that glistened in the morning sun.

On Tuesday morning, May 21st, three days before the lease expired, my front doorbell rang.

I checked the peep-glass. It was Derek.

He was alone. He wasn't wearing his office suit; he was wearing jeans and an untucked polo shirt. His eyes were sunken, dark shadows pooled beneath them like bruises. He looked like he hadn't slept in a week.

I opened the door.

"The Audi is in the driveway," he said.

He held up the two key fobs, the polished chrome and black plastic gleaming in his palm.

"Come inside," I said.

He stepped into the kitchen and set the fobs on the butcher-block table. He didn't sit down. He stood with his hands jammed into his pockets, staring at the floor.

"Brianna’s father wouldn't co-sign," Derek said. His voice was completely devoid of inflection, like a radio playing in an empty room.

I stood by the sink. "Richard wouldn't?"

Derek let out a bitter, strangled sound that was meant to be a laugh. "Richard told her that cars are depreciating liabilities. He told her that successful people don't tie up their credit in European imports when the market is volatile. He offered to let her borrow his eight-year-old Ford pickup until she 'sorted herself out.'"

"I see."

"She threw a vase at the wall, Mom. A six-hundred-dollar ceramic vase from Atlanta. She smashed it right into the drywall in the entryway. There's a hole there now. We can't afford the painter to fix it."

"Where is she?"

"Her sister came and picked her up. She’s staying with Eleanor in Brentwood for a few days." Derek looked up at me, his face twisted with misery. "She told me that if I can't provide a basic standard of living for my wife, she doesn't know what we’re even doing."

"A basic standard of living," I repeated softly. "A four-bedroom house in Windrush, an eighty-thousand-dollar car, and a wine subscription. That's what she calls basic."

Derek didn't answer. He couldn't.

"The mileage is under the limit," he said, nodding toward the keys. "Thirty-two thousand miles. I had it washed yesterday. The interior is clean."

"Good," I said. "We have an appointment at the dealership at eleven o'clock. You can drive your truck behind me and give me a ride back."

The drive to the dealership on West End was thirty minutes of unbroken silence. I drove the Audi. It was a remarkable machine—the leather seats cooled my back with silent fans, the digital dashboard displayed a three-dimensional satellite map, and the engine purred with thirty-five thousand dollars of German engineering. It felt solid, powerful, and utterly unnecessary. It was a rolling monument to someone else's vanity.

When we pulled into the service bay, the same finance manager—now promoted to lease-end director—walked out with an iPad in a heavy rubber case.

"Mrs. Wakefield! Good to see you again," he said with professional cheer. "Are we turning this beauty in for the new 2024 model? We have some fantastic lease-pull-ahead incentives this month."

"No, thank you," I said. "I am returning the vehicle. The lease contract has reached maturity."

He blinked, glancing at Derek, who was standing ten feet back, looking fixedly at a poster of a race car.

"Are you sure? We can waive the disposition fee if you roll into a new lease today—"

"I’m sure," I said. "Run the condition report, please."

He spent fifteen minutes walking around the car with his tablet, photographing the tread depth of the tires, checking the glass for chips, and recording the odometer reading.

"Everything looks pristine," he admitted, sounding slightly disappointed that he couldn't bill me for excess wear. "Sign here, Mrs. Wakefield. And here."

I took the stylus and signed the digital screen twice.

*Pauline M. Wakefield.*

He handed me a yellow carbon slip: *VEHICLE RETURN CONFIRMATION.*

"You’re all set, ma'am. Thank you for choosing Audi Financial."

I handed him both fobs. "Thank you. Have a pleasant day."

I walked toward Derek’s pickup, an eight-year-old Chevy Silverado that had a dent in the tailgate from a boat trailer Arthur had backed into twelve years ago. I climbed up into the passenger seat, closed the door with a loud, tinny slam, and buckled my seatbelt.

Derek got behind the wheel, started the engine, and pulled out into the traffic on West End.

As we waited at the red light by Centennial Park, he glanced in the rearview mirror at the gleaming glass palace of the dealership receding behind us.

"She’s never coming back, Mom," he whispered.

May you like

"If she doesn't," I told him, looking straight ahead through the windshield, "she will have done you the greatest favor of your life."

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