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Chapter 10 - The Return Counter Reckoning

At 9:55 AM on Tuesday, I sat in my parked car outside the Southridge Mall plaza, watching the retail staff unlock the glass double doors of the flagship department store. The morning sun was sharp and blinding against the lingering frost on the windshield.

Right on time, Trevor’s Audi pulled into the adjacent parking space.

He climbed out looking like a man who hadn't slept a wink. His designer coat was rumpled, his hair unstyled, and his trunk opened to reveal a stack of oversized shopping bags and branded boxes.

I stepped out of my car, my purse over my shoulder containing the original paper receipts my father had quietly slipped into my hand via an early-morning envelope drop while Mom was still asleep. Dad had driven over at dawn, handed me the receipts through his truck window, whispered, *'I'm sorry, Jewel,'* and driven away before Beatrice could notice he was gone.

"Let’s get this over with," Trevor muttered, dragging three large bags out of the trunk.

"Grab the electronics boxes first," I said, pointing toward the trunk. "Those hold seventy percent of the total value."

For the next two hours, Trevor experienced the exquisite agony of public retail repentance.

At the electronics counter, the cashier scanned the unopened PS5 consoles and high-end accessories. Trevor stood stiffly, staring at the floor while the clerk examined the seals, processed the returns, and asked for the original payment card. I stepped forward, swiped my unlocked card configured strictly for incoming credits, and watched the digital ledger reverse:

* *REFUND PROCESSED: -$1,450.00*

* *REFUND PROCESSED: -$920.00*

* *REFUND PROCESSED: -$480.00*

At each stop—the designer boutique, the high-end sporting goods shop, the jeweler where he had purchased an $800 gold chain for himself—the scene repeated itself. With every beep of the barcode scanner, Trevor’s inflated self-image shriveled a little more.

By noon, the total returns amounted to $6,840.00.

That left an outstanding balance of $4,642.16.

We walked out of the mall into the bright winter air. Trevor stopped near the entrance, leaning against a concrete pillar, breathing heavily as if he had just run a marathon.

"That’s everything unopened," he rasped, looking at me with undisguised hatred. "The rest is gone. The ski deposit is non-refundable, the food was eaten, and the kids tore through the other clothes and toys. You happy now, Jewel? You completely ruined my family's holiday."

"No, Trevor," I said, putting my sunglasses on. "I just balanced the ledger. Your balance is forty-six hundred and change. First installment of one thousand dollars is due on February first. If you miss it, Oliver files the title transfer on your motorcycle."

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He sneered, clenching his fists. "You think you're so smart, don't you? You think you have every angle covered."

"I don't leave things to chance," I answered. "Now go home."

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